mr aires evaluation

In this documentary, i put the effects which i thought were suitable for the film.  i done this because it suited every scene and i the way i edited the documentary  and the way it was set was good.


One thing is that i didn't put transition on the video because i thought it wouldn't suit the film, but in this case i was wrong and some of the effects could have been better, for e.g. i could have had different effects for every scene but instead i made all the effects the same on each scenes. also the sound wasn't really that good because i didn't know how to work the audio really good and some scenes were loud and some were low

there are somethings i would like to change and these are some of the video effects because some was multi-coloured scenes, another thing is the audio and one last thing is the camera view (using the camera properly)

in conclusion the documentary in my opinion was good because it suited its purpose and the response i receive from some people was good.

 .EXT.DUBAI HIGHWAY.NIGHT
 White van driving on a highway.

 INT.WHITE VAN.NIGHT
Bob, a serial killer is driving to Dubai in a white van.


                                            BOB:
its been a long journey, i hope it was worth it (worried face)

INT.HOTEL RECEPTION.NIGHT
Bob walks into a wooden brownish hotel reception and the wood is made out of mahogany.

INT. HOTEL ELEVATOR.NIGHT
Bob is n the elevator. He looks tired.
                                                                    NARRATOR: (VO.)      

he's on to a hotel so he doesn't get caught by the police and the FBI, he's been most wanted for 2 years now and is a big threat.
                                            BOB:
this should be a good place to rest for the night (cheeky smile) 

INT. HOTEL ROOM.NIGHT
Bob is sitting on the couch  reminiscing about his journey.
                                          
                                                            BOB:

I need to go to another hotel, been in this one for too long, police might catch me then hand me over to the FBI, I've been most wanted for 2 years and i aint gonna get caught now (angry)


EXT.LOCAL CHIP  SHOP.DAY
Its day time and Bob is outside the local shop 

INT.INSIDE LOCAL CHIP SHOP.DAY
Bob is inside waiting for his turn to be served.
                              
                                       BOB: 
 This queue is so long and i'm so hungry man i need to get some chips, (hungry face)


A rookie cop enters into the local chip shop and see's him then says 'what the hell? (confused face) is that Bob!?!?!?
                            

                                    Policeman:
                              OI you stay there!

                                     BOB:
Oh sh•t (runs out of the shop as fast as he can and gets away)